New and maybe improved: Chapter 10

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New stuff now.

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You know it.

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What can I say? Minor differences. Everybody who read the original, keep away.

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A few more differences here.

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Almost the same, too. Really only for people who couldn't stomach the threesome, lol.

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So. I'm going to start posting this now. This chapter is nearly the same as the original chapter 4, save for one minor change. If you have read the original version this will bore you to death and/or put you to sleep, so I've put that one detail at the end of the post, okay?

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